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Young Centaur Remake by GatesuRyu Young Centaur Remake by GatesuRyu
So, following :icondeems: advice, I decided to remake one of my first deviations. The one I chose was Young Centaur [link] back from April 2005 and it was a pretty good drawing for the time by my measure. He's really more of a Faun/Centaur Hybrid...

Done in about 2.5 hours during and after Computer Art Class. I'm realizing that I should get a new version of Potatoshop.

I may work on it more, I may not. It's not really finished but it's at a good pausing point. What do you guys think? should I put in the time to finish him up and make him all pretty or is this good? Comments and Critiques plz.
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:iconmuhminatali:
muhminatali Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh he looks wonderful
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amanokawa Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
FINISH IT! Pleaseee....?
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2009   Filmographer
I'm afraid it's as finished as it's going to be. I may redo it again later, but who knows.
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VintageRainbowToast Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw, he's so cute.
I love his arm fur.
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2009   Filmographer
thanks :D he's such a funny little cross breed.
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KitsuneYoukai Featured By Owner May 17, 2009
It's about time you finally fixed it at least a little. =P It's been sitting there all awkward in your gallery for a verrrry long time. Anyways, I think the coloring is much to soft and blurred. Sure, it's a nice effect, but it hurts the eyes - at least mine. The water is a soft element, so can afford to be soft, but the rocks? They aren't supposed to be chocolate marshmallows, are they?

The body still looks a little too short, and too round. Make the coloring look like the body is one piece. =P Too much light on the rump!
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner May 23, 2009   Filmographer
good critique! I'm a little swamped with finals (I'm in the comp lab right now working on my CMPA website) but I'll get on that when I can :D
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KitsuneYoukai Featured By Owner May 27, 2009
Awesome opossum then! Just doin' my critiquing job. o-o
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Peter-the-Fisherman Featured By Owner May 10, 2009  Student Artist
nothing mends the sprirts like a pan flute. Awesome work, this is awesome and over 9000.
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stargliderx Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Nice composition. He does look a bit overweight though.
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner May 11, 2009   Filmographer
I'll try to fix that up. thanks :D
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akireru Featured By Owner May 6, 2009  Professional General Artist
I like it as is :3
I guess you could add some more textures or refine the background, but honestly I like the semi-messy look.
You don't want to overwork it.
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AkaiPanda Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
Very good piece. Very soft, great quick painting. It's good now, it's up to you whether you want to go in and fix it up some more...but it doesn't NEED it :P
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner May 5, 2009   Filmographer
thanks :D I'll probably go back when I have time and finish painting out the sketch lines.
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Deems Featured By Owner May 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Wow, so your improvement was....infinitely more drastic than my own XD That being said, on its own this is a great piece: great depth in the background and the muted colors make for a very serene piece overall. 2.5 hours? You are -magic-

That being said, I think his shoulders are a bit high relative to his collarbone, or perhaps his neck is a bit short or low down...but a small matter ,that.
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GatesuRyu Featured By Owner May 5, 2009   Filmographer
I've gotten much faster painting messy digitally :D just think of it like painting instead of coloring and it all gets much quicker.

I agree, his shoulders need adjustment I meant for them to be up, but his neck suffered for it, I'll clear that up later.
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